peer review two essay
essay I will send a doc
- What is the thesis? Is it clear in the paper?
- Does the introduction get your attention? How? Can it be improved?
- Does each paragraph have a topic sentence?
- Does each paragraph have support/evidence? (Descriptive language)
- Are there strong/interesting transitions? Circle the transitions. Does the essay flow or is it stilted?
- Does the essay have a strong conclusion? Does the author prove his/her thesis?
- What part of the essay do you think is least effective and needs work? Please make helpful suggestions for improvement.
- What part do you think is most effective? Explain why.
- Is the paper MLA formatted?