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Hello,

I need you minimise the errors in the essay I wrote. Please follow the feedback of my lecturer and correct them. I will provide you all the information you need. I also provide you with what the lecurer told me.

Lecturer message:As I read it is unclear as to which option your choosing. It seems the BMplan. remember it is a particular cohort group. e.g. Year 7. Read the task sheet again. the last part of your is generic. No reference to Rogers or Glasser Plan as to what the BM plan might look like. If it is the plan you need to be justifying what a Rogers Glasser plan.

Policy: if policy your need to critically report on BM policy. Criticallly evaluating it against the literature, policy frameworks and theory.

I hope this has helped, good luck

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