dumb down my essay
Sooooo…I basically need someone to dumb down my paper. The tutor that wrote this paper wrote it based on their knowledge of South Africa and it doesnâ€™t sound like I wrote it at all.
Iâ€™ve attached my instructors comments on the paper and he thought it was plagiarized! Please make sure that ALL the sources match what is in the paper, go through and change ALOT of the info and dumb the information down. Remove and add new information PLEASE. This paper needs a COMPLETE OVERHAUL, not just a tweak here and there.
Lastly of course no plagiarism !!! make sure everything that he mentioned in the comments is taken care of.
DO MOT SEND ME A PAPER WITH ALMOST THE EXACT SAME WORDIN! IT NEEDS A COMPLETE OVERHAUL!!!
TURN ON TRACK CHANGES!