draft report review 1
Deliverable length: 400-600 words
Review draft report and provide meaningful feedback. Refrain from generic feedback, such as simply stating “good job.” Your feedback to other students will be most helpful if you not only point out weak areas but also offer suggestions for improvement. The best feedback takes a 3-stage approach to identify the following: What was done well, Weaknesses and Areas for improvement.
My Rational please see attached for IP3, looking forward to constructive criticism. Essentially a retail store in the Midwest with 3 stores looking to expand into 3 more stores. They need to fix what is broke, square up the network, set a proper template for future stores, and hit the goals set by the owner. Please let me know about read-ability and any areas for improvement. Thanks.